December 8, 2006

  • Inspired by Philosophy and "In Defense of Elitism:"

        Over the past half century, the idea of public
    education has gradually become more of a right than a privilege. At one
    time, graduating high school was a decorous mark on one’s resume; now,
    however, it is almost laughable for someone to endeavor for a
    respectable job with only a high school diploma to their credit. And
    with this notion follows the idea that college is now thought of as a
    right of passage for those who have managed to wake up and attend their
    classes regularly for twelve years. This inclination holds true, as the
    percent of high school graduates who go on to college is irreversibly
    on the rise.
        Also apparent is the trend of congestion in
    particularly popular fields of study; forensics, law, and journalism
    are the new business majors. What is to happen to all those students
    who get out of college only to find out that the supply of graduates in
    their degree greatly outnumbers the demand for them? And yet another
    question to ask is: if this egalitarian movement towards higher
    education continues, and seemingly every high school graduate goes on
    to pursue a degree, who will work in the factories?
        Educational reform is greatly needed in this
    country, but it seems that each attempt supported by our leaders is a
    step in the wrong direction. Our latest educational reform act, aptly
    named “No Child Left Behind,” is the perfect example of our leaders’
    failure to remedy America‘s plague that is mediocrity. I’ll touch upon
    this thought in a more detailed manner latter on.
        With no further postponement, I’ll submit that our
    leaders would benefit greatly by reading Plato’s Republic. Plato’s
    concept of an education system--where all are included in the beginning
    and then gradually taken out and put into their respective caste
    according to merit-- seems, to me, to be the best candidate for
    educational reform. While this system was used primarily for the
    selection of who would rule in Plato’s ideal society, it’s principles
    could also be exploited for determining what style of occupation every
    citizen of a society could acquire.
        To some extent, this concept has already been
    realized in England. Their education is broken into tiers much like our
    elementary, middle, and high schools, but at the end of each tier,
    those who show neither aptitude nor diligence to succeed are then
    transferred over to a lesser vocational school, such as for mechanical
    work or carpentry. Those who do show promise are rewarded with
    progression to the next tier. This “thins out the crowd,” so to speak,
    and creates less congestion in higher education when compared to a
    system like the United States’.
        Regardless of whether or not the act works according
    to its intent, our country’s No Child Left Behind act is completely
    averse to Plato’s meritocracy. Instead of inspiring any sort of
    motivation in students to compete and excel out of fear of not
    progressing (and ultimately not living to their full potential), the
    stipulations set by NCLB cause schools to lower academic standards so
    lesser students can still pass by.
        Another effect of NCLB is that genuinely gifted
    and/or driven students end up being grouped with their
    less-than-stellar peers, and benefit less from the achievement of their
    education than they would otherwise. Any astute follower of Plato
    should be upset by this aspect of our system and how it looks after the
    stragglers rather than glorify the excellent.
        Perhaps instead of limiting this philosophy to only
    our leaders, Plato’s Republic should be read by the entirety of this
    nation. One problem driving acts such as NCLB into execution is the
    naturally egalitarian sentiments held by our citizens; instead of being
    satisfied with a land of equal opportunity, we are collectively in
    favor of and striving towards a land of equal success; instead of
    believing that everyone is responsible for their own disposition, we
    believe that they were not given enough chances to succeed.
        I do not mean to say that every American is so
    egalitarian, as fact that I am American disproves such a statement. It
    would be better to justify my claim by saying that somewhere in the
    chain of power-- whether it be representatives, supreme justices,
    senators, our president, or the whole of the three branches-- this
    mentality of “excelling without justification” runs rampant enough to
    allow something like No Child Left Behind to pass.
        It is common understanding that Elitism is in direct
    opposition of Egalitarianism. Alongside this, Elitism is a word usually
    dealt out with a negative connotation. It seems to me that it should
    not be so; to be in favor Elitism, defined as belief in the rule of
    elite (or ‘distinguished,’ to use a similar, yet more favorable,
    moniker), is to be in favor of Plato’s ideal. If anything, this
    antipode of Plato, Egalitarianism, should be the less favorable term.
    To clarify, let me set another query before you: is it crueler to make
    civilization realize that some people simply do not succeed in life and
    separate them into castes, or to let them keep on fooling themselves
    that everyone can be their own boss someday?
        To assume that a hypothetical society--one where all
    members would read and truly follow the principles set by Plato-- could
    exist may be too prospective. Nevertheless, I maintain that such a
    society would be better than the one we currently live in. If such a
    purely Platonist society did exist, it would be void of envy. Everyone
    under the same allegiance would willingly accept that they are
    responsible for their place in life, and they would be unable to hold
    others who excel in contempt, for they were given the same opportunity
    to succeed and failed, by their own doing, to do so.

Comments (5)

  • That was very well written. What is your major again? Cause you could compete with being an English major with that writing.

    Remind me again why we aren't bff?

  • high five! i tried to argue a similar point in my english comp 1 class and everyone treated me like the devil. you're very right.

  • Yeah, same in my comp 1 class.

    I'm guessing it was when you read the excerpt from "In Defense of Elitism."

  • You are quite right Mr. Taylor. I couldn't remember the name of the article since it's been about 4 years since I took the class.

  • A human being should be able to change a diaper, plan an invasion, butcher a hog, conn a ship,
    design a building, write a sonnett, balance accounts, build a wall, set a bone, comfort the dying,
    take orders, give orders, cooperate, act alone, solve equations, analyze a new problem, pitch manure,
    program a computer, cook a tasty meal, fight efficiently, die gallantly.
    Specialization is for insects.
    --Robert A. Heinlein, The Notebooks of Lazarus Long

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